The original feedback from my tutor Keith Roberts can be seen here.
Again I was pleased by Keith's positive comments on my assignment. The points I am particularly trying to take on board are:
- Academic referencing. This is something I need to be more conscious of and incorporate more of it in both my learning log and my assignments.
- Spending more time looking at the work of the photographers Keith has recommended. I tend to be conscious of their work rather than particularly familiar. I do need to become more active in searching out their work and getting to know and understand it better.
- Keith mentioned how, after seeing 3 submissions, he felt that graphically my photographic work is quite simple and that this is not a bad thing. This had made me think about my photography and perhaps bear this observation in mind as I produce more work.
- Keith mentioned study visits and their importance. I have made a real effort to attend as many of these as I can and I am quite pleased with what I have learned from attending them.
One thing I do need to do is to absorb the feedback and then act on it for the next assignment rather than doing the next assignment and then looking to see if I have incorporated the feedback in the work.